I'm 4 followers away from 9000, let's try something new. Reply with your trailer and I'll reply with 1 thing I think could be fixed or improved. (if this gets lots of attention I reserve the right to stop at any time 😅)

After “you have only 30 days” I expected to read what the goal or win state or end state was, but I don’t feel like anything after clarified that. I feel like what should come after that title card is what completes your pitch, but instead it dives into game mechanics.